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Gintoki: Love at First Sight

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(My first ever attempt of writing a fan-fiction
When I had written this, I had intended to write this for Gin-san's birthday...
But I realised this story...

...had nothing to do with his birthday←

So I submitted this the week before.
This is purely just a boring simple oneshot

Well, here it is:

-Hirari)


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Love at First Sight

Today that silver hair still looks soft and fluffy.
The dead looking eyes haven't changed.
The wooden sword is slinging by his waist as always.
It's all the same as always, but he seems to look a bit hotter today.

The one who I am talking about is the guy sitting on the bench of a park, slightly dozing off.

His name is "Gin-san".

I don't know his full name, but I know this much since I once heard a man with sunglasses call him that.

Gin-san usually talks to that man here at this park, or sit on that bench, dozing off.
As for me, I come to this park everyday to give my dog a walk.

I'm surprised myself, but as a matter of fact, I had fallen for him at first sight.

"He's a bit weird, don't you think? I'd rather prefer Hijikata-san from the Shinsengumi..." my friend had said when I once talk about this.
And so she had given me a long chatter about choosing my choices wisely, but it's too late.
I had fallen for him already and nothing can be done there.

After the day I had fallen for him, I walk my dog as a reason to come to this park whether I am busy or not.
Gin-san isn't always there, but he's there most of the time.

And today again, I am walking my dog to this very park.
I find Gin-san dozing on the bench again... and just being able to see him had always been my happiness.

But today, I have decided that I'm going to attempt to talk to him!!

But I can't even step within 1m radius from him.
I can't talk to him like this...

I made up my mind so I have to go with it!
"Never give up" is my motto.
Come on! Go do it!!!!


My adorable dog, Nell, supports me by quietly watching over me.
I lift my unmoving legs and thrust them forward towards the bench.

Only 3m to go....2m to go...

The distance between us gets closer and this is the first time I'm up so close to him and I don't even know what to talk about and my mind is completely blank and...

I finally freeze when I'm a meter away from him.

Gin-san is just right there.

I build up my courage and open my mouth when... "Woof!"
At the same time my dog, Nell, barks, I trip over.
I had probably been so nervous that I hadn't even noticed the stones at my feet.

But...

"Hey, you okay?"
I'm in Gin-san's arms as he had supported me before I had fallen to the ground.
I had only gazed at him from afar.
But I loved him so much.

And right now, his face is right up close...
And is eyes are staring right at me.

"U...um...I-uh... um..."
This is a situation I hadn't expected and my mind blows up in panic that I can't find myself to talk properly.
Watching me like this, Gin-san speaks up.

"So cute."

"Eh?"
My back straightens and my body goes rigid.

A-a-a-a-a-and w-w-w-w-what's the m-m-m-meaning of t-t-t-t-that....?


"What's her name?" Gin-san asks as he pats Nell's head.

Oh, right. Of course. He's talking about the dog. The...dog...

I sigh inwardly before answering.

"Nellagar-panish-scraellader is her name, although I call her Nell."

"What's with that tongue-twisting name!? Keep at as just 'Nell' then!"
Gin-san's response makes me blank in thought, but then I realise that I should've just named her "Nell".
Being able to hold a normal conversation with Gin-san makes me so happy that I involuntarily form a smile.

"Um...don't you have a pet, Gin-san?"
I had just planned to talk to him casually... but I fail when I mistaken in what I say.

"Huh? Why do you know my name?"

Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh! What have I done!!!!!!!!!!!!

I had done it...

I'm probably gross...being stalker-like... he must hate me now, feel disgusted.

"Um, well..that is..."

"Well, I already knew her name too though," Gin-san says as he pats Nell.
I don't understand his words, so I just stand and stare.

"You come here quite frequently, don't you? And I heard you call Nell's name a lot so."
My heart starts thumping madly as Gin-san looks towards me with a soft expression.

He had known my existence...
I'm so happy that I'm nearly in tears.

"I always came to this park because I wanted to see you, Gin-san! Can you please tell me your full name?" I confess and ask really fast.

My face is probably bright red and looking so panicked...

I wait for Gin-san's reply as I feel my heart that's about to pop out of my ribcage any time soon.
I then feel a big, warm hand pat my head.

"Sakata Gintoki. I came here whenever I could because I wanted to see you too. Please tell me your name," he said with a bit of an exaggerated tone when he used formality, as a joke.

When I look up at Gin-san, he smiles as kindly as I expect.
And I inwardly think how hot he is.

He had been so far away...
...but now he's right before my eyes
...and my heart is about to explode from extreme nervousness.
When I say my name, he then softly plants a kiss upon my lips.







My love at first sight finally fulfils
...into a mutual love <3
:icongin-sanplz3::icongin-sanplz4: X OC
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My very first oneshot!!
It doesn’t make any sense, I’m so sorry... ;_;
It means Gin-san had been love at first sight towards this girl too.

This story is so boring!!! ←
I want to write a more exciting story, but I’ll get embarrassed~///←
But anyway, I really really want to thank the people who read this story!!!
Thank you very much ^V^
© 2011 - 2024 Hirahirari
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animefreak735's avatar
Sooo cuuuuteeee~~~